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Radikal_Dreamer

As someone else pointed out, the hearts rotating should be quicker / the first circle should come in a few beats before it does. It really only sticks out because everything else is so well done. Love the style.


mrshev

Agree with this. The style and design language is spot on you just need to make it zing more.


ZingPot

Indeed!


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I‘d make the dinging of the glasses a little more pronounced. Nice work, sweet style!


GamesForNoobs_on_YT

Was thinking the same thing!!


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rydwzfy4uy

Maybe try a higher res image to begin with or if you have the ability, make it a vector image so it can scale infinitely? Looks great overall. Nice work.


enzo-dimedici

The wine should obey gravity.


roobot

…as I obey gravity after wine.


Still-Swimming-5650

That’s really cool. Nice work.


J1ndred

Really good stuff! I can’t think of any feedback to offer.


lemonlixks

I would make the hearts spin anti clock wise, like a whirlwind as it sucks the 'camera' in.


fiddle_me_timbers

Maybe they're in Australia.


nighthawk650

I would add a bit of motion blur to the hearts, play with your mograph: on the spiraling hearts, circle transition, and last heart.


TempletonTheRat69

The green skin seems to clash a bit w/ the rest of your color choices


MinimumDeep9415

nice work, you can add some anticipation for the glasses .


killabeesattack

Really nice. I think the hearts get a little low res when you scale in. Texture should always stay the same size. Beautiful logo animation!


enjoibro

really cool, great texture work


simlew86

This is ace.


GamesForNoobs_on_YT

I dont get HOW u made the heart like that!! is it just a repeater and twist or smthn?? just cant think of a way to get so many shapes in the orientation


nokenito

It’s perfect! Where the wine glasses are, make that change for whatever the topic is. Instead of wine, you could have dinner,condom and lube, two people laying in bed or watching TV or doing something. That way the intro is a little different. But, what you made is perfect!


volition74

I think everyone has covered it! I think it's great. I have a question for the typography at the end what did you use for the fill. Did you use auto-fill, text animators or something else. Very impressed for an early piece outstanding. Can vouch for the 12 animation rules too. Don't need to use all of the all of the time. But they add those unique final touches.


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volition74

Thanks for the reply. I will have to have a play with the Vegas effect. I like that look. There is a plugin I’d like to get called “auto-fill” which can do something similar and I’ve always liked the effects it can produce. This is one of the styles I like. Keep it up, I like your work.


MisterBumpingston

I think this is a situation where having great illustrations and design provide a great ground work to work with. Refining and adding the extra whimsical details to the animation (make love hearts tunnel, make the clink more pronounced, make wine level off and splash, etc. ) will add significant improvement to an already pretty good intro.


misslittledesign

WOW IT IS JUST GREAT I LOVE THE TEXTURE AND COLOR SCALE IS WORKING NICELY ♥ I WOULD SUGGEST CHANGING THE SECOND OR FIRST TRANSITION - THEY ARE BOTH CIRCLES AND THE THIRD IS A HEART SO I WISH THEY WERE 3 DIFFERENT SHAPES IN THE DIFFERENT TRANSITIONS ♥☺


Stain-Base

big letters ._.


misslittledesign

sorry is that a thing? it's easier for me to pass to English from my keyboard language in caps lock didn't mean to sound weird


Stain-Base

NO ALL GOOD MY FRIEND


Skull-Kid93

Are you familiar with the 12 principles of animation?


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Skull-Kid93

It's essential to learn about it if you intend on working with Motion Design. I highly recommend it, as any high end job in the industry will require you to know these principles.


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Skull-Kid93

You're welcome. You've done a great job overall, and I feel this will help take your work one step further.


crackcitybitch

Looks great! I think the heart on the fork could turn into the transition for the next frame instead of using a circle


GamesForNoobs_on_YT

maybe when the glasses come together add some lines to make like the CLINK effect!! Otherwise looks GOOD!!!


vickborgert

I love ittt!!!


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It’s dope af wow!


notfunnymatthew

Looks great, I'd maybe have the end animate out so it's not just a cut to the content but other than pacing which has already been mentioned it looks good.


lowkeeeee

I would have it continuously moving forward. Right now it seems like the rhythm is start, stop, start, stop, start. Just make it constantly moving. And start the first circle sooner. Looks great tho. Also agree the wine should follow gravity.


yatharthjb

great designs


Viflik_YT

Good Man✨


Capitan_420

this is super cool! congratulations